Wheeeeeeeeeeeee!!! Percy/Annabeth goodness!!! :D You really scared me there for a while, till everything got better in the end, haha! It's true, I guess being Percy's girlfriend would be kinda tiring at times, poor Annabeth... But she really loves him, doesn't she? :) However, if he messes with her laptop, I have the feeling he won't get any kisses for a long time :P I really like how you wrote her here, her annoyance and her worry are really well intertwined (am I using that word correctly? Sometimes I just can't find the exact word in English I'm looking for :P). I think you wrote her patience getting thinner and thinner in a great way, that's why I was scared you were gonna break them up. I'm happy you didn't! Keep up the great work!
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Date: 2011-03-31 04:24 pm (UTC)You really scared me there for a while, till everything got better in the end, haha! It's true, I guess being Percy's girlfriend would be kinda tiring at times, poor Annabeth... But she really loves him, doesn't she? :) However, if he messes with her laptop, I have the feeling he won't get any kisses for a long time :P
I really like how you wrote her here, her annoyance and her worry are really well intertwined (am I using that word correctly? Sometimes I just can't find the exact word in English I'm looking for :P). I think you wrote her patience getting thinner and thinner in a great way, that's why I was scared you were gonna break them up. I'm happy you didn't!
Keep up the great work!